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Post by railas on Jan 22, 2012 22:36:03 GMT -5
MC Username: Saliar
How did you find out about this server: My homies
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Full Name: Railas
Nicknames: Ray
Apparent Age: 22
True Age: 21
Race: Woras/Lura (Woras Skill)
Gender: Female
Hair: Long black hair, about stomach length
Skin: Pale
Eyes: Blue with a green center
Height: 5'7''
Weight: 110
Body Composition: Thin. Large.
Mental State: Clinically insane in short bursts. She can usually control it at certain times
Place of Residence: Woras Capital
Place of Birth: Lura forest
Known Relatives: None
Friends: Psammaens, Rona Duskrain.
Enemies: None
Group/Guild affiliation: Woras
Philosophy: Never trust anyone
Favorite quote: You just gotta man up. - Jiggle-Billy
Occupation: Assassin
Weapons of Choice: Bow
Likes: Salty/bitter things
Dislikes: Sweets.
Favorite Foods: Coffee
Favorite Drinks: Coffee
Favorite Colors: Sky blue
Hobbies: Spying on others
Physical Features: At first, she seems like any ordinary Rowas. She also has... large... yeah. She always wears a long cloak to hide her secret. Aside from her ordinary features listed above, she has an 18 inch black tail. She also has a detailed large detailed tattoo of a rose down her back.
Bio: Railas was always strange. It started off in the story of er birth. As her mother, Kali, was traveling through the Lureian forest, she was jumped by a group of lureian males. They quickly stole all her money, and the leader got other ideas. She was loved and left for dead. Thankfully, a more kinder lureian rescued her and cared for her. Rialas never knew about the secret, thing that it was the kinder lureian male that was her true father. Railas lived with the lureian male for many years, as she quickly became adept in athletics and speech. She developed chronic bipolar disorder, and had quick and sudden mood swings from time to time. At age 17, there was a sudden banging on the door. Her mother quickly told her to find the Woran city and to look for her brother. As Railas was pushed out of the house, her house immediately caught on fire. Ray stood by and watched it burn, having no possible way of rescuing any possible survivors. Horribly depressed, she went to the Woran city with two objectives in mind. To find her lost brother and to get revenge. Later as she grew in the city, she learned to easily manipulate men. She obtained a job as an assassin.
Details about the Lurea: They were a cat race, such as that one race in skyrim.
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Post by Clue314 on Jan 22, 2012 22:42:06 GMT -5
Umm, I believe you can't be a different race with the same abilities of the other.
And coffee doesn't exist in Skalas.
But nice bio, I suppose.
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Post by Umune on Jan 22, 2012 22:49:27 GMT -5
Just a few typos here and there.
Woras, not Rowas
Ronu, not Rona
Other than that, no real problems. I don't see any outstanding problems. Except for the tail that is. What.
Whatever the case...shouldn't be a problem for RP. Approved.
I'm one of the three admins, the other two being Ashtheking and Splamzloard. Blah blah blah. You probably know the drill.
Welcome to Skalas.
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Post by Clue314 on Jan 22, 2012 22:52:34 GMT -5
She is a cat, thats why there is a tail.
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Post by ashtheking on Jan 22, 2012 22:53:03 GMT -5
I suppose you're defining the Lura as a disease or disorder affecting Woras that makes them more catlike? No special abilities, but just different InRP?
I have to say, I really like this bio, it's quite descriptive.
On a side note, we're getting a lot of females in the RP recently. The gender's are almost balanced. Could create some interesting Romance lore, if it's not too squick, (it is for me, but hey, just putting it out there.)
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Post by Clue314 on Jan 22, 2012 22:56:12 GMT -5
No I am pretty sure that she is a cat race, taht has similar powers to the Woras.
Reminds me of when I tried to create a druid in TJRP.
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Post by Zomgman on Jan 22, 2012 22:59:51 GMT -5
Uuh... more than 2 lines of bio please?
EDIT: Oh gawd, saliar¸
EDIT2: we are starting to get too much people in the wora capital, nothing happens anywhere else anymore.
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Post by ashtheking on Jan 22, 2012 23:03:25 GMT -5
Clue, sal states that Lura is a Woras Skill, implying it's something that affects Woras, like a genetic mutation or something.
As long as he / she has no special powers and is just a Woras with a different name and look, i'm fine. I'd take it as an expansion to the Woras lore.
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Post by Clue314 on Jan 22, 2012 23:05:47 GMT -5
But she says taht they are a race at the very bottom.
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Post by railas on Jan 23, 2012 0:00:17 GMT -5
Actually I meant the lura to be a new race all ltogeter... Therefore referring I'm crossbred
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Post by bloberis on Jan 23, 2012 0:01:02 GMT -5
And coffee doesn't exist in Skalas. Why not? Coffee could fit in just fine in skalas. Some group of some race from some tropical area probably makes it. |
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Post by Clue314 on Jan 23, 2012 0:06:34 GMT -5
But no one is from a tropical area.
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Post by purelamb on Jan 23, 2012 8:18:50 GMT -5
So we can just make up races willy-nilly?
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Post by ashtheking on Jan 23, 2012 8:21:41 GMT -5
Not for the server, no. InRP, I'm fine as long as they're minor and only exist in some small corner of the world. I'm overriding the bio and saying that Lura is a genetic mutation of the Woras species, making them more cat-like. OR, this person is a half-breed of a Lura and a Woras, the Lura existing in some far corner of the world or something.
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Post by Umune on Jan 23, 2012 8:35:53 GMT -5
Can we have the Lura be a result of high magic exposure at a very young age, causing different genes to be expressed? Hence, the tail. However, the effects would be purely aesthetic.
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