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Post by daylightbeast on Jan 30, 2012 11:19:14 GMT -5
MC Username: daylightbeast How did you find out about this server: used to play on the old sever ------ RP Name Oloril punt Age: 35 Race:wora Bio: After many, many sleep less nights working hard Oloril has been promoted to prime minster and adviser to the king of Woras kingdom. But, he has never had a good life his father was a respected warrior of the people but was considered to be a traitor when it is thought that he ran away when the civil war broke out. When his mother found out she hung herself in shame. So the name of punt is looked down upon. because of this he was bullied all the way though his child life even the helpers at the orphanage treated him differently as if he has murdered someone and deserved to rot. but in his new position of power will he be able to restore respect of his name? and will he be able to find out the truth about his father, did he really run away ?
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Post by splamzloard on Jan 30, 2012 11:59:28 GMT -5
It looks fine to me, but to avoid bias, I'd like another admin's approval.
EDIT::Fixed spelling
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Post by ashtheking on Jan 30, 2012 12:05:06 GMT -5
Could you fix some of the grammar and spelling? "He never had a good live", for example. And perhaps you could make it a bit longer?
After that, you're whitelisted.
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Post by daylightbeast on Jan 30, 2012 16:29:38 GMT -5
ok i have edited it
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Post by FlamingDragon96 on Jan 30, 2012 16:31:52 GMT -5
daylightbeast... hmmm... were you the guy that built the huge wolf blimp?
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Post by daylightbeast on Jan 30, 2012 16:33:22 GMT -5
no i wasn't i build the trade building which got destroyed twice both time a day or the day after i had built it
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Post by FlamingDragon96 on Jan 30, 2012 16:36:29 GMT -5
Oh yeah... btw that wasn't me. I know I bombed the crap out of Nova but I was told specifically not to destroy that building.
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Post by daylightbeast on Jan 30, 2012 16:39:19 GMT -5
yer i know
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Post by ashtheking on Jan 30, 2012 16:41:18 GMT -5
Whitelisting.
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Post by catplanetcatplanet on Jan 30, 2012 16:51:28 GMT -5
hihi oloril. I was Wesh.
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Post by daylightbeast on Jan 30, 2012 16:56:09 GMT -5
hey catplanet and thanks ash for whitelisting
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Post by splamzloard on Jan 30, 2012 18:47:07 GMT -5
But after you bombed it flaming, someone blew up that building. *cough*ibetitwasscud*cough*
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Post by purelamb on Jan 30, 2012 19:03:31 GMT -5
In all honesty the building was too big and useless just like a few bulldogs on this server.
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Post by Clue314 on Jan 30, 2012 19:52:21 GMT -5
Bulldogs . What bulldogs are useless Pure?
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Post by purelamb on Jan 30, 2012 19:55:30 GMT -5
Bulldogs . What bulldogs are useless Pure? the hell are you talking about?
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