Zomg's bio

[Zomgman]

MC Username: evildude2000

How did you find out about this server: TJRP
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RP Name: Jack Leblanc

Age: 24

Race: Human

I'm jack, I come from Esla, the giant floating prison in the middle of the sea where people go to die...

Right now I should be dead, but im not...
Esla should be escape-proof, But nothing is...
I was in Esla for assasination of the king, which put me in a maximum security cell, But the guard was an idiot and fell asleep...
I opened the cell, then I opened a bunch more cells to make my escape easier then I ran... I ran until I found a bow and then stuff got pretty bad for the guards. I kept running, shooting improvised arrows at whoever tried to stop me, I ran for hours, I was desperate to get the sandwich out of this place. After mabye half a day, i was starting to think Esla was enchanted to confuse the crap out of anyone trying to escape, but it was no enchantement, it was built like that.
I finnally got to the decks, and i got really, really lucky.

There was a boat transfering a prisoner...

I took it, and i ditched the boat, i just took a lifeboat to be harder to find.
And I rowed... I rowed the boat for days, weeks... Then i hit land......

[splamzloard]

Good actual story. You had a lot of ellipses there. I think that if you do get whitelisted (which I'm sure you will), you should write some mythos about Elsa. It sounds like an interesting place.

[scud47]

How do you get out of a cell just because the guard falls asleep?

[splamzloard]

He took the key off of him and then unlocked the door. Duh.

[scud47]

That's maximum security?

[ashtheking]

Horrible administration? The guard should take Zomg's place, and a creeper should take the guard's. "I don't think sssoooo. SSSSSS BOOM" if anyone tried to run.

Whitelisting.

[scud47]

Thus blowing up the walls and allowing others to escape.

[Zomgman]

I didnt blow up the walls, i got more keys from beating up guards and taking keys...

[scud47]

Was the guard inside your cell? And why is there a key at all?

[catplanetcatplanet]

Also can we have a different name than Jack? That was my gripe with Billy. I mean how about a last name. That at least would make it a bit less stereotypical.

[Zomgman]

I'm horrible with names, thats why i coudnt come up with a last name

[splamzloard]

Actually, Billy just didn't know his last name. His parents died when he was too young to remember them, and didn't learn of their death until his early teens.

Also, that was my first time creating an RP character ever. In fact, that was my first time on an RP server ever.

[catplanetcatplanet]

Hmm how about Jack Davidson, Erikson, Oscarsson, something-son, Robertson the list goes on.

[Umune]

Suggesson?

[FlamingDragon96]

Just look up a fantasy name generator, that's what I did for both my first and last name